This is our old script now that we did not use.
Camera shows Looms and Hannah
Looms: Darth Butler, this is your end! You cannot beat me, I NEVER LOSE!
Hannah: Ahhhh no!
A shout from the teacher ends this shot
Miss Scrott: CUT !
The camera zooms out and shows two other characters Jack and Omi talking.
Jack: Im such a loser, I can’t believe how bad I am at everything, I can never do anything right.
Omi: I know what your saying man, the best kiss ive ever had is with my mammar, im that bad with the women.
Jack: That’s nothing! At least your mammar kisses you! I think its time for it to change I really going to go for it and….
Jack trails off and he sees this beautiful girl walking straight past his eyes.
Omi: Oi mate, you’ve got no chance, give up before you’ve even started.
Jack sits gorming out and drools over this extraordinary girl.
Omi: No mate, don’t do it.
Jack stands up and moves towards the girl after finally summing up enough courage.
Jack: I can do this, im sick of being a nobody, im going to get that girl!
Friday, 13 February 2009
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